tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post5737827670662565616..comments2010-03-29T19:30:54.418+02:00Being Brazenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05238202392512794465noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-88649331728262201652010-03-29T17:57:59.971+02:002010-03-29T17:57:59.971+02:00It was as if I were there with you.<br />I touched my neck, expecting to feel the sand. I miss the ocean.<br />*** sigh ***Jeanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00063512487104114597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-38812710165563839572010-03-22T19:12:37.595+02:002010-03-22T19:12:37.595+02:00A lot of great imagery here.Rachel Elizabethhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07050119457229635051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-15369309837431096662010-03-19T11:29:43.591+02:002010-03-19T11:29:43.591+02:00When do we get the next installment? It&#39;s great! Need to know what happens!Lanahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00129968321443746774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-40203923660249031512010-03-19T06:45:44.347+02:002010-03-19T06:45:44.347+02:00Nice!Want to read more. All the best dear. Have a great day.Take care.rubashinihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06654379986438747676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-8290309745802585822010-03-19T00:48:15.426+02:002010-03-19T00:48:15.426+02:00Awesome writing! Can&#39;t wait til the next installment. : )J.J.http://www.blogger.com/profile/14394864319127058771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-30537143637912361802010-03-18T23:09:58.286+02:002010-03-18T23:09:58.286+02:00Go for it BB! Thee&#39;s nothing stopping you from finishing this.pohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00711119384786965311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-53053076735160524822010-03-18T17:14:02.399+02:002010-03-18T17:14:02.399+02:00I love seeing someone making their dreams come true! You have great talent - keep going.Simply-Melhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01682621214434542008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-79401054229342691512010-03-18T15:42:33.475+02:002010-03-18T15:42:33.475+02:00This is a brilliant start...look forward to reading the rest :-)Nathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08601477827694926858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-13931139335838212672010-03-18T15:28:09.330+02:002010-03-18T15:28:09.330+02:00Really good. I want to read more!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-19486708082703727312010-03-18T13:42:35.652+02:002010-03-18T13:42:35.652+02:00REALLY! Hook at the first line Brazen. I see a shining career ahead you lady. So much talent!!!Lady Timeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08507715198484688665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-59829422669207531652010-03-18T11:12:07.639+02:002010-03-18T11:12:07.639+02:00wow .. i&#39;ve never read something that good in a long time :)Erranthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01684346395835339560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-27746962697671428962010-03-18T11:11:44.270+02:002010-03-18T11:11:44.270+02:00Nice work Brazen...I see some Gillian Clarke in you :)Camhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05830748536656149930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-63176581614757896952010-03-18T10:57:28.941+02:002010-03-18T10:57:28.941+02:00Very nice indeed.cathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15788508986252339771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-33398518599711415592010-03-18T10:53:26.290+02:002010-03-18T10:53:26.290+02:00Its really good! I was like damn i want to read more! :) Cant wait to see you on the shelves of exclusive books!! xxSuperficialgirlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02993859197214929727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-43264043733756223622010-03-18T10:42:45.983+02:002010-03-18T10:42:45.983+02:00there is a book in you waiting to come out! <br /><br />er, have you ever gone to the beach and done that?<br /><br />Oh and BTW i will be in CT for the TWO OCEANS! I cannot wait! email me any suggestions on things i MUST SEE and things i MUST DO :)Prixiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06597871242965263933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-84346500460007886302010-03-18T10:21:11.797+02:002010-03-18T10:21:11.797+02:00Betty Bake - Thanks my friend x<br /><br />Desi - yeah, its a piece of something I am trying to write.<br /><br />Lady Times - really? thats great. thanks.<br /><br />Love and Stuff - hahahaha! It gets alot less Danielle Steele I promise. ;)Being Brazenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05238202392512794465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-1961391209494267972010-03-18T10:13:56.618+02:002010-03-18T10:13:56.618+02:00At first I thought maybe to Danielle Steel for my liking. BUT then &quot;Oh wait, this is good&quot; When I got to the end I was like damn now what... <br /><br />Keep going!Love and Stuffhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07881917406661282212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-21503451680815112732010-03-18T10:07:04.679+02:002010-03-18T10:07:04.679+02:00i want to read more and more and more and more!!!Lady Timeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08507715198484688665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-46802905590668778782010-03-18T09:54:12.583+02:002010-03-18T09:54:12.583+02:00It&#39;s really really good!! <br />xxdesihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11413282877439467280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-23250838896641362092010-03-18T09:53:27.218+02:002010-03-18T09:53:27.218+02:00holy moley..this is good.<br /><br />is it your own writing?<br /><br />:)desihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11413282877439467280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3128611944406569759.post-73050801881491392952010-03-18T09:34:58.893+02:002010-03-18T09:34:58.893+02:00lovely writting - well done!<br />so proud of you :)<br /><br />waiting for the next installmentBetty Bakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09170133989348110267noreply@blogger.com